Shawn takes a crack at rewriting Tim's scene to help him understand what he's missing on the Narrative Device.
Then we hear Leslie and Danielle's edits and feedback on what he got right and wrong.
When they ask Tim what he thinks of all this, lots of emotions start coming out including his feeling that he's not writing anymore... he's pretending to write.
Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QZGyUNetvNGfKAjwyfF3m4r9RPoMQN4g3Q18oWXoLOw/edit?usp=sharing
To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-279
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